Comments on: Stay On Target https://briankoberlein.com/2015/07/28/stay-on-target/ Brian Koberlein Tue, 19 Feb 2019 19:13:36 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=5.0.3 By: ScientistSeesSquirrel https://briankoberlein.com/2015/07/28/stay-on-target/#comment-2793 Mon, 03 Aug 2015 06:54:38 +0000 https://briankoberlein.com/?p=5026#comment-2793 This is good advice for technical writing too. Too few scientific papers are brave enough to start with the second of your black-hole sentences. There’s no reason why simple but vivid writing needs to be excluded from our scientific literature!

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By: dolores vestrich https://briankoberlein.com/2015/07/28/stay-on-target/#comment-2701 Tue, 28 Jul 2015 21:21:08 +0000 https://briankoberlein.com/?p=5026#comment-2701 The first statement says too much, and it is incomplete – the second statement says too little, just a “come on”. .

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